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| DarkBlysse 2007-05-29 ch 1,   | I liked the beginning lines of the first few stanzas (Death, cold death...etc). They really drew me into it a lot more than I would have been otherwise. And the end was good, too. And, yes, it is funny that you put it in the 'Life' section. Lol. |
| lalamushu 2004-06-11 ch 1, | i like the ending. it shows a future strong comeback. good times! keep writing, you're really good! |
| EternalTimexX 2004-06-11 ch 1, | This one is one of my favorite, but its a little cliched, so work on that. ~*Keep writing*~ |