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| redsage 2005-06-23 ch 1,   | oh, that hurts... how you wrote it, sad and tragic yet lovely. |
| A Work In Progress 2005-06-17 ch 1, | This was a great poem, but what I guess you have to rmemeber is God only sets things in motion we and everyone else choses their own path. |
| les petits bateaux 2005-06-17 ch 1, | This poem, I can relate. Most people who had their loved ones taken away from them would try to ask God why. Wonderful piece. :) ~~Trinity |