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| highmaintenance 2007-01-01 ch 1, | Yes I haunt this site too! This was so sad, so lovely. Makes me depressed when I think that I'm 18 and never had a girlfriend/boyfriend. Have been kissed though... -Lucy |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2006-01-12 ch 1, | 16's not all that sweet, really...or well, it hasn't been in my two weeks of being 16.excellent poem. very well written, it just...flows. great work. X Anita (please review back) |
| iknowthethirdthingaboutpoet... 2006-01-12 ch 1, | If you're a guy, why would you care about "sweet sixteen"? If you're a girl, are you one of those white rich girls who decide they're bisexual just so they can become part of the minority? In any case, this is a bad poem. The beginning is all right, but it goes downhill after the third line or so. |