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| nectar in a sieve 2006-09-11 ch 1,   | Oi that's always the hardest thing to figure out eh? The style of this really caught me, but I'm not quite sure what about it did. I really like the almost false sense of imaturaty that goes along with this. Like with the phrase "bestest friend" it goes down into a "oh it's just a kid blah blah blah" but by the obvious heart-felt emotion at the end, all childish assosiations have been dispelled. In other words, I loved it :) ♥brit |