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| Manifest-Destiny-x X 2007-06-27 ch 1,   | it's very good, and it sheds some light on things... |
| Elegant Raven 2007-06-27 ch 1, | It's different, but it's so repetitive that it gets boring. It needs to be changed up a bit. You could continue this list of "What is..." forever. At first, it was really interesting and a fun read, but as it continued on it didn't change and I almost lost interest. If you alter something and do some of the stanzas a little differently it'd make it a lot more entertaining. |