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| Twilight Starr 2008-01-05 ch 1,   | Great job describing feelings. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-05 ch 1, | i know what you mean here. there was a lot of raw emotion in this. when you said 'teared' i think you meant 'tore' but other than that it was pretty good. keep writing. = ) |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2008-01-05 ch 1, | Is the "Because You have" supposed to have a capitalized "y"? Just curious. Anyways, the poem is pretty good, I suppose. It didn't feel particularly original, but somewhat heartfelt, at least. Definitely powerful. I'm not exactly in love, and don't think it's amazing, but it's a nice, sort of sad poem. Not depressing, but interesting. The flow is very good - even and smooth. I like the use of words in this. Nice job. |
| TiReD oF tHiS bOrInG tOwN 2008-01-05 ch 1, | it is really good. it is intesting and judging from this poem you dont care what my opinion is on it and tht is a good thing cause u shouldnt. but it is good anyways |