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| SerialXLain 2008-11-26 ch 14,   | “He typically smokes bones.” I literally laughed out loud... Hrm. Danny surprised me with the acid. He was all cute and innocent at that part till then. But I loved how Saul took care of him. It made him seem almost...sweet. Nice chapter. :) |
| SerialXLain 2008-11-25 ch 13, | Aw. Casey was cute. :3 "to wash up and go back on the clock." So thought that said "cock." Hurray blowjobs...!? My reviews suck, man. |
| SerialXLain 2008-11-25 ch 12, | “My pecker, nimrod.” I loled. I also loled somewhere else, but I forgot where it was. Danny is too cute sometimes with his little hurt feelings and love... |
| SerialXLain 2008-11-25 ch 11, | Took me forever to read this. D'aw. How sweet and sad. D: I'm glad that it's out in the open though. Like the "Danny hurts me, but I don’t think I want that to go away." line. |
| Sinthe 2008-11-12 ch 14, | This is quite possibly one of the best fucking things ever. I love this mix of bitter and sweet, and everything is so down to earth and dirty. The soft, gentle undertones in their relationship is pure bliss. I want more, fucker. |
| Bloodfeeder 2008-11-03 ch 14, | Aw... He went all protective on him! So sweet! Can't wait for more! Really, I really like this story!! Lee |
| Rinkika 2008-09-21 ch 14, | I just realized that I have yet to review this, so I'm going to. I really love this story! It's kind of more realistic than most based on dialogue alone. I never realized how much I half-ass most words I say until no. xD Anyways, this is good shit. Update soon, please! ~ R!n |
| CaFFy 2008-09-16 ch 14, | Lol you know too much about drugs. |
| slowlydancingtothestars 2008-09-14 ch 14, | I love this story and I can't wait to read more! |
| Blue Papillon 2008-09-11 ch 14, | Wow. Just wow. This is so realistic and wonderful. Absolutely can't wait to read more. |
| magalina 2008-09-11 ch 14, | Aw, Saul is sweeter now. Poor Danny, though. With his dad and all... Sorry it took me so long to read! >.< I love this :) |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-09-10 ch 14, | Omg that was sad and scary! Ya know what? I think it would be interesting if Mom/Andrew found out about Danny/Saul. It would be cool to see their reactions. Just a little somethin if you need material after you're done with the prewritten! =) |
| WTF OMG STFU 2008-09-10 ch 14, | aw that's all I can really say..Completely adorable. Gawsh Danny and Saul are cute! They make me smile. lol. post sson! |
| Sakru angelqueen 2008-09-10 ch 14, | Nice chapter! Poor Danny and his acid trip, but luckily Saul was there to help him. |
| narcissistic 2008-09-10 ch 14, | huh. poor danny. first drug he did was acid...haha sucks. |