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| StoicCrying 2008-11-15 ch 1,   | THIS IS SO SWEET! I love it! It's one of the best one-shots I've read. |
| Aimee is Awesome 2008-10-19 ch 1, | That was awesome. I love the way you slowly revealed the characters and backstory while developing things between Ollie and Zacharias. It was really cute, in a not-cutesy, believable way, and very believable. Maybe it's because you crafted this in love for your sister, but it's really touching and simply nice. =D I loved it, thanks for sharing with all of us! |
| Mistress of Apple Pie 2008-09-29 ch 1, | Ollie reminds me of Lenny from the book Of Mice and Men for some reason (such a cute character). love the oneshot =) |
| Koneikaa66 2008-09-27 ch 1, | I like that oneshot of yours and just wanted to thank you for the enjoyable time I had reading it. |
| SerialXLain 2008-08-30 ch 1, | Aw. To be honset, I was kind of like, "This is way too long for me..." because of my Shortest Attention Span Ever, but by the time I was halfway through it, I was wishing it was longer. Aw... I also wish I had something better to say...but I've been rendered speechless. Uhh... Oh, but I do like how there was growth with not only Z (too lazy to spell his name correctly) and Ollie, but with Port too. Plus I really like the name Port. Ich liebe dich. |
| Mya 2008-08-20 ch 1, | A-maze-ing story ^^ Sorry it took so long to read >, |
| a.m. 2008-07-30 ch 1, | This? Is practically perfect in every way. I got a little teary there toward the end-- it's just that beautiful. Thank you, as always, for sharing something so wonderful. |
| emmatheemmu 2008-07-28 ch 1, | Once again, beautiful. Your writing is addicting. |
| the flaming river 2008-07-28 ch 1, | Oh my god! That was so amazing in so many ways. I can only say, thank you for writing this. |
| Naomi Schemer 2008-07-27 ch 1, | It was as great reading this the second time around as it was the first, despite the fact that I already knew the plot. I think this is one of your more powerful one-shots, actually, because it manages to tell all sides of one story that is not just romance. I guess it proves your worth as more than a romance writer or a one-topic writer better than anything else. It also has more main characters than usual (well, for a short story). Now, don't get me wrong, I love your oneshots, but this one is one of your big masterpieces. I hate to say it, but it perfectly adheres to any rules I ever learned during the fiction writing units in English class. Also, Ollie's adorable. |
| Bedlam Chaos 2008-07-26 ch 1, | Funny that your answer came while I was reading this. I love it. It's heart-warming and that's it. :) |
| Sugar Coated Lemons 2008-07-26 ch 1, | T_T Moar? |
| DragonSapphire 2008-07-26 ch 1, | This was just... stunning. Your sister is so lucky for such an awesome present!! (As I am for my ghost story from you |
| mia5081 2008-07-26 ch 1, | That was incredibly sweet. I'm so glad that Ollie found someone to love him :D ~Mia |
| bee bee 2008-07-26 ch 1, | beautiful. absoultely riveting. the characters just pulled me in. very realistic. gorgeous. |