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| SerialXLain 2008-11-26 ch 1,   | I normally HATE characters like Grimmypoo, but since I've decided to love you in a creepy way, I read it anyway and did like it. Aren't you just the luckiest person EVER to get a review from ME!? (Yeah, right. But I can still pretend I'm special, damn it.) "Mom beat me in public and people cheered and nearly slapped the woman who tried to stop her." I loled...because everyone always wants to see that when they go to the grocery store. Or at least I do. Haha. You said hobbit toes. “…I went cross-eyed.” lulz... I love half brother stuff... |
| Amindaya 2008-10-13 ch 1, | This is so Amazing (capital A)! How are you so talented, huh? Tell me! Mitch is such a total, bona fide asshole. I LOVE it! And Michael being a sweetie (who, on top of eveything else, tackles guys to get some kisses, which is definitely the best kind of sweetie) balances him really well. This was hilarious and indelicate and everything made of awesome and wowness. Thanks so much! |
| magalina 2008-09-10 ch 1, | loved it :) |
| Naomi Schemer 2008-08-25 ch 1, | Now, I had to read this one in installments. I like it...and I don't have any critique. Fun characters...and I admit I loved the joke at the end, despite possible cheesiness. Yeah, I'm going to read the last Stepbrothers chapter now... |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-08-25 ch 1, | OMG! I loved it! lol |
| Twin Eclipse 2008-08-25 ch 1, | this was the crudest, most hilarious, cut open story i have read in a while, and i loved it you need to write more stories like this!! |
| Sugar Coated Lemons 2008-08-24 ch 1, | hee. That was really cue. I liked it. |
| Mya 2008-08-20 ch 1, | Hee ^^ I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! |
| PhaithMcCoy 2008-08-20 ch 1, | Oh, hell, man. That was fucking funny. Ha. And hot. Gotta love the incest, and such, yah? Very awesome, anyway. -Phaith |
| Garrett 2008-08-19 ch 1, | Yet another wonderfully delicious serving of Xanthie goodness. You rock socks, bitch |
| nonaccount 2008-08-18 ch 1, | I LOVED the ending! I don't know if you came up with that joke by yourself or what, but it's funny and goes well with Mitch's drollness. Amusing one shot, I enjoyed it. :) P.S. Sucks about the glasses. |